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Ironbreed
12-29-2008, 12:34 AM
Hi there...post uli and as usual some comments.:p
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u173/rommelrecopuerto/sendbenny.jpg
Loozter
12-29-2008, 12:52 AM
Nice pallete sir, nice choice of color and materials.. add displacement or bump po cguro on the stones.. design is cool.. parang bahay of some hell of a rich guy :D hehehe tska ung car po ata.. needs a little more "shine" hehehe..
aldrinv2
12-29-2008, 01:33 AM
Sir,
IMHO lang camera correct mo lang. displace on the materials. Car looks floating baka na-angat lang.. But nice render keep on posting.
crease
12-29-2008, 02:45 AM
nice lighting my friend, this is what i meant; you already have a nice lighting preset, use it... crits; double door map n a single door... no beam at leftmost outer porch... plant thingies on the carport area, uhmmm, bad idea... no roof ridges/caps?... no sidewalk?... entry porch steps a tad too high; at 0.30m ba yan?... segments on the curve things at the eaves... kay bas ba design ito?... munta ka bodega dinan dkang saken a 3d ugse muno deng rpc mu...
Ace27
12-29-2008, 06:58 AM
favorit po ntin stone mtrl huh..hihi..liitan lng po cguro map scale ng pavement..hihi post pa po sir...nice one here! kip it up!
stillshady
12-29-2008, 07:27 AM
i think parehu tau ng problema sir, walang nag'a2pear na thumbnail.hehe:D
comments have been said po.nice color palette..
tama po si sir ace.pansin ko lang mahilig po kau sa stone mat'rl.but nyway, u use it well..
post more..
algore
12-29-2008, 04:08 PM
bro
nice rendering, minor comments lang is nakita yung end portion sa rooftiles,
ridge cap kulang, RPC pala gamit mo dapat 3d na bto para masyadong astig tingnan! yun lang, overall is GREAT!!
algore
Ironbreed
12-29-2008, 08:02 PM
Sir,
IMHO lang camera correct mo lang. displace on the materials. Car looks floating baka na-angat lang.. But nice render keep on posting.
Galing sir nahuli mo daya sa camera heheheh...napasubo na ako kasi hindi ko naibalik sa dati I thought ok na hehehh anyway thanks, i-default ko na lang camera ko sa susunod.
Ironbreed
12-29-2008, 08:08 PM
nice lighting my friend, this is what i meant; you already have a nice lighting preset, use it... crits; double door map n a single door... no beam at leftmost outer porch... plant thingies on the carport area, uhmmm, bad idea... no roof ridges/caps?... no sidewalk?... entry porch steps a tad too high; at 0.30m ba yan?... segments on the curve things at the eaves... kay bas ba design ito?... munta ka bodega dinan dkang saken a 3d ugse muno deng rpc mu...
Hindi ke sir bas yung design sir dun sa isa kong client yung ngang door naging 1 and a half... hehehehe di ko agad napansin...yung plant thingies grass na RPC....yes sir hindi ko na nalagyan ng ridges/caps and sidewalks medyo na displace sa isip ko naging after lang ako kasi sa outlook ng design and speed...I'll make it better and complete nextime...nukarin pla bodega mu sir?
remlex
12-30-2008, 06:11 AM
the design is good tol!..ung stone lng sa terrace napasobra...ung kotse din parang dinikit mo nlang..hehe! pero hanga ako sa design ng bahay mayaman ang owner...:buttrock:
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